One: I am glad that you are working on putting graphics and a logo on your blog, but I still don't think the whole thing is that cohesive. You are your own brand, baby. Two: Let's see some color work Three: write about your work. What am I looking at, anyway? We see here, in a literal sense, what you've been working on, but we don't really know or UNDERSTAND what you're working on. Four: Write a better profile. This blog is on your business card. People are going to look at it. They're going to want to know a little bit more about you. Show all the nice people how clever you are. Five: I know you've taken at least SOME of these drawings from concept to final product. Show and tell. ...and that's all I've got for now.
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OK DON:
One:
I am glad that you are working on putting graphics and a logo on your blog, but I still don't think the whole thing is that cohesive. You are your own brand, baby.
Two:
Let's see some color work
Three:
write about your work. What am I looking at, anyway? We see here, in a literal sense, what you've been working on, but we don't really know or UNDERSTAND what you're working on.
Four:
Write a better profile. This blog is on your business card. People are going to look at it. They're going to want to know a little bit more about you. Show all the nice people how clever you are.
Five:
I know you've taken at least SOME of these drawings from concept to final product. Show and tell.
...and that's all I've got for now.
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