OK DON: One:I am glad that you are working on putting graphics and a logo on your blog, but I still don't think the whole thing is that cohesive. You are your own brand, baby.Two:Let's see some color workThree:write about your work. What am I looking at, anyway? We see here, in a literal sense, what you've been working on, but we don't really know or UNDERSTAND what you're working on.Four:Write a better profile. This blog is on your business card. People are going to look at it. They're going to want to know a little bit more about you. Show all the nice people how clever you are.Five:I know you've taken at least SOME of these drawings from concept to final product. Show and tell....and that's all I've got for now.
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